Saturday, September 25, 2004

inquiring teachers want to know...

I've been teaching a long time, but I'm noticing a shift in my practice. A lot of it has to do with participating in the AAMU Writing Project in June 2003. But I'm focusing more on my feelings and experience as teacher. Let's see if I can explain this better. For instance, I believe that grades hinder students' learning. Now, how can I really deal with that in a system that requires me to grade. Well, let's take the in-class essay exam for 203 & 204. Until this semester, this is how I structured assignment:

  1. pass out format & discuss

  2. thesis workshop

  3. students write essay in class and hand in

  4. I read essays, highlight rubric, add comments, give grade

  5. if students want to revise, they meet with me

  6. students write summary of conference, revise paper, write summary of what they did to revise & hand it all in along with original paper and rubric

  7. I read revision, conference & revision summary, and mark rubric with a different colored highlighter & assign new grade


What's wrong with this picture? Writing a summary of how one has revised helps to focus attention on revision process but only after the revision is done.

This is how I'm revising the in-class essay assignment:

  • same as steps 1-3 above

  • I check off that essays have been done and staple rubric but don't look at essays

  • hand essays out in class for peer review

    1. reviewers scan paper & highlight 3 sentences on writer's paper: thesis, reason 1, reason 2

    2. reviewers read more carefully and highlight rubric

    3. reviewers write additional comments & return to writer

    4. writer & reviewer can discuss review

    5. writer responds to reviewer's comments in writing and turns in


  • I take essays home and read essay, read rubric and peer reviewer's comments, comment on all of that and add my own highlight on rubric

  • return essays & students read all comments & write a revision plan

  • I collect essays again, comment on revision plan, return papers

  • writers revise, hand in, I highlight rubric, assign grade, return




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